You are lingering
Over my head like rain clouds …
When will you fall like rain in my heart?
But wait …
Not now …
Not yet ……
Ever since I’ve acknowledged this f e e l ing
Interestingly, I have felt less alone …
There are still some lingering doubts in my mind; though
My journey into this has been very unplanned
So practicing the pause and silence would probably work, telling myself …
And the rain clouds are
hovering over me ….
Hence taking pause has
become easy silently, and solitarily …
As if
I’m in love with the bliss of solitude …
These rain-clouds are lingering
over my head
And I’m looking at it from the bright side
That they are with me means to me
As if
You’re with me!
So, wait .…
Not now …
Not yet …..
Fall like rain in my heart
After sometime, after some pauses …
Rain in my heart for no reason
Let the clouds part, doubts be gone,
Fall in love with me …
Like a soft, whispering breeze while it rains
Only after sometime, after some pauses …
Not now …
Not yet …
♥️
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I really loved this.
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Thank you dear Michele.
I really love this too specially when I read it quite slowly … giving apt pause for a moment to think and then read again … slowly …
😌
Have a wonderful time….
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you dear Ranjana.
I love this too. And I think it’s more beautiful when you imagine yourself in such abode and read it slowly ….
Just my thought about my ‘Rain clouds’ musings ☺️
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Loved the poems shared in this!!
Mesmerizing
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Thank you Devang. Happy to see your comment here … you made me smile ….
😊
You too smile, and smile often …
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You always say that Roksana
How are you?
How is your health?
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I’m fine Alhamdulillah.
What do I always say?
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Thank you Devang. Happy to see your comment here … you made me smile …
You say this always, haha
Stay well, keep shining
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I’m truly happy to see your comment on my blogposts.
I think my blogposts are simple, humbled, and sensitive. Not all may like my posts. But this is how I am.
May be some like for a brief while then they may drift away ….
However, you are coming consistently and encouraging me with your thoughts about the post and that is one thing people give to others, that’s time, and it’s a precious gift of all time…
Thank you for your precious time here. You make me smile. I’m truly grateful for that.
🙏
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Well… I receive very postive energy from you and your work. You respond in a friendly manner. And you care about your readers. Like you are not posting for the sake of sharing. You actually care to respond.
This is why I will come again and again to spam you, haha
Keep smiling, inshallah
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That’s great.
Devang, you too spread positive energy.
Well, okay, I happily welcome this kind of spam … ha ha
Let me tell you a story about ‘ha ha’ …
So we’ve a siblings group. As my other sisters live abroad. We catch up often through writing, sharing pictures, video calling, dumping our frustrations or just pure jokes etc and a lot of other things. And I’m the joker and tube-light over there and they enjoy that, I enjoy too of course.
So two days ago, just for a brief while, I was a bit sad, and it reflected in my sharing and immediately my younger sister marked that, and asked me, ‘Why are you sad?… anyone said anything to you?’ – I said, ‘No’. and then I was just keeping quiet.
If I’m sad, I go complete quiet and away. Cause I do not look good in sad face or sad writings etc. It drains me more. And I feel people do not like to hear about sad things in general. So I avoid that. I may become a shoulder to others to listen if they wish to share, but I feel double sad if I ever happen to share my sadness with others.
However, yesterday I was silently just sharing some of my favourite quotes to my siblings group, a lot of quotes of mixed emotions and wisdom topics ranging from life to grieving to parenting to accepting to gratitude….
Lastly I wrote there, “quotes শেয়ার করতে করতে tired হয়ে গেলাম… হা হা (Uff, I’m tired of sharing all these quotes with you all now… ha ha”
Then immediately my sister wrote there
“সব quote এর পরে তোমার হা হা হা টা দেখেই বেশি ভালো লাগলো।
তোমার হা হা is the best quote so far
যেই মন খারাপ মনে হয়েছিল।
(Loved your ha ha at the end of sharing all these quotes. Your ha ha is the best quote so far. You seemed so sad.)”
Then another sister also said, ‘হ্যা। আমারও। আবার হাসো তো। Yes, me too. Please smile again.)
Then I laughed and wrote there
Haha ha ha haha ha
Now see I have shared a Ha ha ha song for all of your request. How is the song ? 🫣
My sister wrote, ‘Once more. Once more.’
😊
I love when I can spread positivity and smile around.
Thank you Devang once again for your valuable time here and for spreading the spams of positivity altogether. In shaAllah
Smile often and make others smile often too
🥳🎉❤️
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Well you don’t seem to be sad now
Because you wrote this much, ha ha ha
It’s good.
But, if there’s anything that’s bothering you. Please feel free to share. You can contact me easily though mail or social media. I will listen to you patiently.
I wish you some sunshine ☀️
Keep shining
Ha ha 🤭
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Ha ha ha 😃
Thanks Devang. Appreciate that a lot.
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Enjoy your Sunday….
Looking forward to your next poem. 😁🙏🏼🙇🏻♂️🪴🪷
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Thank you Devang.
I enjoyed my Sunday afternoon with my mom and aunt. It was great, simple little chitchat and some activity with homemade snacks …
I’ll be happy if I share any of my musings, thoughts or verses, or something that I own in whatever form it comes, such as, painting, poems, photographs…. or simple minimalistic verses to convey deep emotions ….
Meanwhile I read….
I do not know why I bought a book from Srinagar International airport. But I love airport bookstores and so I spent some time there and I bought few books and one of the book is ‘My Happily Forever’ … so reading it for the pleasure of reading 🙃
Looking forward to your posts as well. 🎉❄️🥳🍕☕️
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I’m glad to know that you had a delightful sunday
I hope there were some “Ha Ha”
It’s great that you find time with something you love. Yes would love to read and view more of your work.
I will searc and know more about the book.
I never purchased books from airports. However nowdays I’m buying too many books, so I’m certain I’ll end up with buying some.
I’ll check out the book you shared.
My posts will take a while. I’m working on some things with my site, as mentioned in the blog. 😊
Please feel free to read some of my other blogs.
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Yes, yes there were some ha ha’ ….
😁
I haven’t yet written much, not as rich content as yours and many other sites. But yes, you can read if you get time. Thank you so much for that. Getting feedbacks from someone genuine is a great matter.
Yes I remember you got a lot of things to do with the updated domain… And I’m sure it’s gonna be unique and popular site. Most importantly your readers will be benefited greatly from your contents.
Meanwhile I’ll definitely read some of your posts. You’ll eventually know because I’m going to write there as well. Knock knock ✊
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Haha, I wish my content was as rich as you say. I’m learning and experimenting.
I hope to benefit the reader by providing read worthy content.
What do you mean by “Write there as well”? 😃
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You’re already doing it – the readers do get benefit from your content.
Like I’m really into this Sattu. Yesterday I asked my aunt about it as my grand mother used to make it and I had the memory of savouring it but never ever I tried to make it all by myself. So my aunt told me about it as I asked her, and she told me that we used to have it with jaggery and that I could recall ….
However, I m saying this to let you believe that yes people like me also felt urge to make something which she almost forgot about it already …
Actually it was not lost entirely …
It just needed the Fat Guy blog to remember the sweet memory with my grandmother and her Sattu.
So in this way, people find your content rich and beneficial.
I meant I may write comment after reading your blogposts… then you will get to know 🙃
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I would love to learn more of your sattu adventures.
A great source of protein and fiber. It’s very nourishing, especially in the Summers .
People eat it differently. They even make tikki( cutlet) out of it. I like it sweet. It’s among few sweet things that I like.
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I like this.
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I love that you liked it ♥️
Can you tell me which lines attracted you more or for which you liked it ?
Thanks
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